The main character in this story is trying to play. To begin with Mudge got lost. Secondly, Henry was calling for Mudge. Then he stood beside a stream. In conclusion Mudge woke up. I liked the book becase it was osome.
Donovan, I love Henry and Mudge books! I'm so glad you do, too. Great job using sequence words like: 'to begin with', 'secondly' and 'in conclusion'. Can't wait to read your next post!
Donovan, you did a great job using transitions in your paragraph! I am glad you liked the book.
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thank you for being a nice teacher
DeleteI like how you used in conclusion at the end.
ReplyDeleteDonovan, I love Henry and Mudge books! I'm so glad you do, too. Great job using sequence words like: 'to begin with', 'secondly' and 'in conclusion'. Can't wait to read your next post!
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DeleteI like Henry and Mudge too.We are reeding the bedtime thumps.
DeleteTerrific job with capitalizing names, using transition words and sequencing. Well done! Mrs. Goldman
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DeleteNice sentence structure, Donovan! Great job.
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